I was fiddling around with dactyls and double dactyls this week. A dactyl contains three syllables: one stressed followed by two unstressed (/ - - ). So, for example, the word marmalade (MAR-ma-lade), which we say with a stress on the first syllable, is a dactylic word. The phrase, "Talk to me!" is also a dactyl.
The rhythm of a dactyl makes you want to dance. It's light and suits playful topics.
Dactyls remind me of pterodactyls. But that's not where I went. Instead, I took out a handy can of Play Doh and opened it. WOWZA!
I read a bit about Play Doh's inventor and history and then, in honor of National Play Doh Day, (September 18th), I wrote this poem:
AN ODE TO DOH
by April Halprin Wayland
Play Doh, invented by Joseph McVicker,
is putty that's squishy and spongy and soft
and supple and yielding and malleable colors--
its bouquet bewitches, it lingers, it wafts
across much of our planet--
over two billion sold!
There's even a fragrance (and who wouldn't want it?)
a perfume in honor (it's fifty years old!)
The recipe's classified--
water and flour, and a sprinkling of salt?
I can fiddle with Play Doh for hour after hour
and if I'm not writing, it's McVicker's fault!
poem (c) 2011 April Halprin Wayland, all rights reserved
For today's WRITING WORKOUT, let's think out of the box.
- twice as many small cans of Play Doh as you have students
- plastic forks, knives and spoons
- writing materials
2) Give them five minutes (or more) to make a person, animal or other creature.
3) If there's time, let everyone walk around the class to look at each creation.
4) Now tell each student to move to the next desk and make one radical change in the figure there.
5) Have them return to their desks and let the class walk around again, looking at the changes.
6) Discuss. How did it feel when someone changed your art? Do you like what it looks like now? Which do you like better?
They can purchase it or use ANY kind of pliable clay they have...or make their own. Here's a 3-minute video on how to make your own (minus the wonderful Play-Doh smell):
In the class on rewriting, I take them through the grand slog of publishing NEW YEAR AT THE PIER.
And once they're completely depressed, they take out their Play-Doh.
PLAY-DOH exercise part 1:
1) Each student has two colors of Play-Doh and a paper plate.
2) Working silently (most choose to mute), each makes a character. It can be a child, an animal, a fantasy character, a tree...whatever.
3) Each takes a photo of her character.
Then I talk about rewriting MORE THAN ENOUGH, with which I had a completely different experience from rewriting NEW YEAR AT THE PIER.
PLAYDOH exercise part 2:
1) Each student shows us their character.
2) I move them into BREAKOUT ROOMS (2 people per room). Each person in turn becomes the other's editor, suggesting one "edit" of the character (such as adding clothing onto the hippo or turning the horse into a dragon...or something super simple, like adding polka dots).
3) Tell them to take a photo of their character after the edit.
4) Back in class, we share how our characters changed and discuss how it felt to be edited. Was it difficult? Did they resist it or feel defensive? Did it make their work better? Different?In one of the classes I teach through UCLA Extension Writers' Program, most of my adult students are surprised that they like the changed creature best. One woman admitted that she liked the changes...but also missed her own creation and felt slightly violated.
Yes...that's exactly how I feel when an editor or my critique group wants to edit (gasp!) my work. Hurt, resentful, violated. Sometimes, if I sit with the suggestions, I end up liking them. I can see how it can take a village to create a vision bigger than my own. Sometimes, though, I reject the changes.
If you'd like to make this more of a writing exercise, you can have your students write a story or poem during the process. You might decide to have them write as soon as they've made their creature, before it is changed. If you have time, you can also have them write after the changes--either about the changed creature or about how they feel now that it's different.
So--dive into Play Doh! Let your room fill with its delicious perfume!
poem and drawing (c) 2011 April Halprin Wayland, all rights reserved