Showing posts with label Esther Hershenhorn. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Esther Hershenhorn. Show all posts

Friday, July 10, 2026

Those Red-White-and-Blue Oldies-but-Goodies!

In honor of our nation's 250th Birthday, 

my fellow TeachingAuthors and I have chosen

to celebrate in our upcoming posts children's

books that celebrate the American Revolution

and our country's history.

I proudly kick-off the series with Red-White-and

Blue Oldies-but-Goodies that remind me of...

me! - so that I can recommend them to you!

(Apologies to Little Caesar and the Romans.)

First, there's Me, as in, Me the Child who

treasured her "Orange True Books."

My bedroom bookshelf held:

Betsy Ross: Girl of Old Philadelphia;

Ben Franklin: Printer's Boy;

Martha Washington: Girl of Old Virginia.

FYI: I'm a Philly Girl, a product of the

Philadelphia Schools until I was 10.

Stories about the childhoods of colonials were

right up my alley, so to speak, as in Elfreth's

Alley which I visited with my Overbrook

Elementary School classmates every year,

before or after visiting Ben Franklin's grave

at 5th and Arch Streets and Betsy Ross' 

house at 2nd and Arch.

Bobbs-Merrill began publishing the 

Childhood of Famous Americans series

with its fictionalized narrative storylines in

1932, releasing 220 titles until 1958.

You can see the titles here.

The goal of the series? "To make the child of

today the friend and playmate of great

Americans of the past."

In 1950 Random House began offering a 

similar, though fact-driven, children's

history series: Landmark Books.

You can see the titles here.

But I remained True Blue to my Orange

True Books.

Next, there's the Me who earned a B.S. in

Elementary Education from the University

of Pennsylvania.

It was in my Children's Literature class that

I first met Newbery and Caldecott medalist

Robert Lawson and his revered (forgive the

pun) titles, including Mr. Revere and I:

Being an Account of Certain Episodes in

the Career of Paul Revere, Esq. as

Revealed by his Horse (Little Brown, 1953)

and Ben and Me (Little Brown, 1939).

Both books are considered timeless. Indeed,

both have been re-released with new

covers several times since the initial

publishing. Ben and Me became a movie.

My professor, Dr. Huus, held the bar high

for children's books.

I introduced Ben and Paul to the delight of

my fifth graders at Bryn Mawr Elementary

School while Student Teaching.

You can read reviews of Robert Lawson's

books here.

Finally, there's Me, the long-time Fifth

Grade Teacher at Chicago's Morgan Park

Academy, then Kenilworth's Joseph Sears

School, who took joy in amplifying the

Scott-Foresman Social Studies text 

In the Americas to teach the American

Revolution via Esther Forbes' 1944

Newbery Medal Winner Johnny Tremain.

The novel follows 14-year-old Boston

silversmith apprentice Johnny from the

start of the Revolution onward as he 

comes to make sense of the war.

Forbes used official records, diary entries,

letters of actual apprentices so that 

Readers  - my fifth graders - lived the

experience in Johnny's shoes, mind and

heart.

Not all historical critics agreed on Forbes'

presentation of the war.

My students agreed, though, how Johnny

helped them be there, living our history.

I remain connected to many of my former

students, now grandparents (!), and all

can recite the words that drove the story:

"Pride goeth before a fall."

Were I teaching the Revolution today to

5th graders, they'd be reading Johnny

Tremain.


With apologies again to Caesar and the

Romeros, what fun walking down Memory

Lane to write about the above BOOKS of 

my past.

May one of them help you remember a 

Red-White-and-Blue Oldie-but-Goodie,

with hopes you'll share the title and/or

memory in our comments.

Happy Birthday, America!


Esther Hershenhorn

P.S.

Thanks to Jan at BookSeedStudios for

hosting today's Poetry Friday.

Friday, May 15, 2026

FINALLY...Doin' As I Tell Others!


                            "And now we're back where we started

                              Here we go 'round again

                              Day after day, I get up and I say

                              I better do it again."

                                        - The Kinks - Do It Again, 1983

I'm happy to report:

I'm doin' it again,

returning to the picture book biography I've yet to get working

as it should so my subject - a little-known but needs-to-be-

known colonial woman whose efforts changed her people

and our country, grabs the hearts of Young Readers the way

she grabbed mine.

This time, though?

After revisiting my research,

rereading successful mentor texts,

re-examining my numerous rejections,

and of course, reliving in my first notes how I fell in love

with my subject,

I reassessed the last of my iterations, the one that earned 

admiring declines,

with both eyes fully refracted and cataract-free.

FINALLY...I'm doin' as I tell others - the students I teach,

the writers I coach, the Readers of this blog.

Why I didn't do so at the start, seven years ago (!) leaves

me gobsmackingly flummoxed.

Think: the proverbial shoemaker whose children go

shoeless.


Thankfully, in reading through the draft, I did discover

a few story elements that were already working as they

should.

I focused the telling on just ONE of my subject's many

lifetime accomplishments, making sure that accomplish-

ment was child-centered.

(Previous iterations offered a cradle-to-grave overview.)

My language and word choice allowed for a tone that

honored both the woman and the Times.

My love for the subject came through loud and clear.

I cringed, however, identifying all the parts that worked,

but needed to work better.

For starters, I offered my Reader not enough of a way 

in to both this long-ago story and my subject's heart.

I needed to intensify the Recognizable Sentiment 

that allowed my Reader to connect with the subject's 

longed-for-quest  - and - as important, with the 

children my subject knew had lost their way.

The hook I offered wasn't enough to compel the 

Reader to turn the page, worried, caring, fearful.

Sadly, too, my subject was not on the page.

She rarely spoke of what she sought, of what she was

feeling.

"Not enough Show..." I would have written in the 

margins were the text written by one of my writers.

Lots of narration. Little scene building.

I left my Reader helpless to draw any relevancy to

the World today, despite the story's children's

status as immigrants.

More concrete details would have brought to life 

my subject's World and Times.

Though beloved by me, my subject as presented

proved less inspiring than I'd hoped.

In summary, I'd paid little attention to the advice I 

shared in my May 16, 2025 TeachingAuthors post

"It's All About the Heartbeat."

The Good News is, armed with Next Steps, I did

as I shared in my TeachingAuthors post in

November of 2010. I found a piece of music that

sounded like my story - Sergei Rachmaninoff's

Piano Concerto No. 2, first performed in 1901.

For months I've been walking and writing in this 

Russian's company, fully lost in the wonder of his 

sumptuous composition.

If you don't know the piece by its given name,

you will certainly know its themes.

You can listen here

Like my picture book biography's subject, this

concerto - its poignancy at times, the longing

it expresses, the sweeps that build and crest,

grabbed my heart long ago the first time I heard 

it. It has never let go.

And that was before I learned how Rachmaninoff

came to write the concerto.

Three years ago, in a Grant Park Symphony

program, I read how Rachmaninoff suffered 

severe depression after his first piano concerto

was disastrously received, so severe he was

unable to compose, until he worked with an

acclaimed hypnotherapist for three years.

"You will begin to write your concerto," he was

told. "You will work with great facility. Your

concerto will be of excellent quality."

Need I write more?

This concerto not only holds Rachmaninoff's

story of Triumph with a deserved capital "T."

It holds my subject's story - one of finding a

way to help children find their way, never

turning back to do what she knew she needed

to do. 

And it holds mine, too - one of FINALLY

finding a way to tell my subject's story to

Young Readers!

At the moment, while considering my 

ending's wording and awaiting my 

brilliant critique partners' critical 

comments, I've decided to use the 

Five-Star Revision Tool I recommended 

in my September, 2011blog post to keep 

me focused.

I've gathered for inclusion in the review 

I wish to receive several of the critical 

comments Amy Alznauer, Candace

Fleming, Barb Rosenstock and Suzanne 

Slade - four of my Favorite Illinois authors -

garnered for their pb bios.

"A great book for a brave woman."

"An important story for children and adults

alike."

"...poetic text..."

"a perfect tribute..."

"Beautifully-written and timely."

"Brings an amazing woman to life."


Here's hoping I won't be singing the Kinks song

I opened with any time soon, at least to ready 

this pb bio for submission.

But if that turns out to be?

At least I know: I'll  be doin' as I tell others!


Here's to sowing, growing and readying your 

stories!

Esther Hershenhorn

P.S.

Thanks to Rose Cappelli for hosting today's

Poetry Friday at Imagine the Possibilities.






Friday, February 20, 2026

What's old is new again!

Sharing the New Somethings I've so far planned for this new year 

has me smiling.

Here's why.

I collected so many 5 x 7 Little Ling Calendars since 1996, they 

became re-usable!

My calendar match for 2026?

1998...


...truly a Banner Year for me professionally.

Fingers crossed the New Somethings that follow be the first three 

of many that auger a similar year.

They certainly prove the adage "Everything old is new again."


New Something #1

I've returned to beginning each day writing my stories.

That practice led to 1998's publication of my first children's book, 

There Goes Lowell's Party!, as well as the sale of two picture 

books - Chicken Soup by Heart and Fancy That.

For eight weeks now, I've spent my mornings with a Story Star 

who claimed my heart and refused to let go. 

As luck would have it, her story is set in Philadelphia in the

late 1830's, the very time and setting of Fancy That.

First thing each morning, a fresh cup of coffee beside me, I'm

back in my limner Pippin Biddle's world, re-reading research

notes, paging through familiar reference books, immersing

myself in my character's story to learn who and what claim

her heart.

Fancy that!


New Something #2

I will not only teach one of the Chicago Newberry Library's

many singular workshops - "Oh, the Possibilities: Writing

for Children" on February 28.

For the first time ever, I will be a Newberry Library student,

registered and rarin' to go!

"Exploring Chicago's NorthSide" is an eight-week seminar 

that explores seven of Chicago's neighborhoods on the 

near North side through readings and Walking Tours.

I found my way to the Newberry Library soon after I began

teaching Writing for Children classes at Ragdale in 1998.

This year marks my 25th year of teaching (both in person

and virtually) "a bounty of new berries, each ripe with

story."

How nice to be a "new berry," too.


New Something #3


John F. Kennedy said, "Change is the law of life."

The Manuscript Workshop I've taught for the last ten

summers at the Landgrove Inn in Landgrove, Vermont 

now has:

    new dates - May 31 through June 5;

    new owners - Emily and Bruce Haupt;

    a new name - The Landgrove;

    a new chef - John Gould;

    and at long last, new Internet service!

The stars were aligned at SCBWI's 1998 Summer

Conference because not only was I named SCBWI's

Member of the Year, I met Barbara Seuling!

It was Barbara who mentored me to become a Writing

Coach, and as if that wasn't life-changing enough, 

Barbara gifted me with the opportunity to continue

her long-time Manuscript Workshop.

The Workshop evolved, so that now I both teach and

coach writers to help them tell their stories, in a much

smaller group limited to six.

Barbara's demand for Excellence and love of writing

for children remain ever present.


Here's to your New Somethings for a Banner Year!

Oh, and thanks to Susan at Chicken Spaghetti

for hosting today's Poetry Friday.


Esther Hershenhorn

P.S.

If this now-updated post looks familiar to some, 

it's because I mistakenly uploaded it on

January 23!

P.P. S.

Check out this virtual Newberry Library class:

"Laura Ingalls Wilder and the Little House Books:

'But It Was A Different Time Then."


Friday, November 21, 2025

With Heartfelt Thanks to The Children's Book...

 Honestly?

It's been One Unimaginably Unimaginable Year for a Non-Stop Finder

of Life's Silver Linings.

But fortunately, as Elaine Stritch sang in her signature Sondheim song,

"I'm still here."

I keep keepin' on, no matter the state of my World(s).

So, "How?" you might ask.


Well, I did turn to my Sure-fire Cures when I first felt my Positive

Mental Attitude whimper:

lakeside walks,

Alfred Caldwell Lily Pond visits,

afternoons at Wrigley,

a Philly Cheesesteak (with fried onions).

Rachmaninoff's 2nd Piano Concerto played in my head day and night.

I resided in Stars Hollow once each day, thanks to a Gilmore Girls 

episode.

Add: daily reflection time, daily inspirational readings, journal writing

and heart-to-hearts with loved ones here and (believe it or not) 

Elsewhere.

My towering grandson's gentle shoulder hug kept me upright and

moving forward, literally and figuratively.


The Good News?  All of the above did indeed help.

The Less-than-Good News? Not quite enough, and for not so long.

Despite my profound gratitude for those who engaged both my head

and heart, the rumblings of my Forever-Always-There-for-Me-and-

Others PMA let me know on a regular basis it was considering

becoming a No-show.


Thankfully, enter The Children's Book.

Rather, the right Children's Book and at just the Right Moment.

It gifted me with what I was so close to losing: i.e. Hope.


In case you forgot: every Children's Book must always offer its

Reader Hope.

Not the proverbial "Happily ever after" ending, which is my 

favorite.

Simply the possibility of such an ending.


Consider what follows a curated month-by-month list of the

children's books that did their job November, 2024 through

today, November 21, 2025, courtesy of my Chicago Public

Library: they informed, amused, encouraged, inspired and

best of all, kept me keepin' on.

Hopefully, they'll do the same for you.

NOVEMBER


..."a fresh and moving look at 

memories, filtered through 

the mind of a child."





DECEMBER


..."a tale of intergenerational friendship

forged through a shared understanding 

of loss."





JANUARY


..."a courageous and resourceful boy

struggles to hold his family together

after his mother doesn't come home."





FEBRUARY

..."a Holocaust memoir of hope when

facing the unimaginable and 

survival, thanks to the kindness of

strangers.




MARCH

..."a historical coming-of-age novel

in which a girl battles her own short-

comings and the random nature of

life."




APRIL



..."the healing power of community 

fixes a neighbor's broken heart."






MAY


..."a mountain-climbing boy finds his

path to healing - and forgiveness..."







JUNE

..."an inside look as well as tribute to

the late great (and my favorite)

children's book creator James

Marshall."




JULY


..."a tender portrait of resilience

and empathy as disaster strikes a 

family."





AUGUST

..."a middle grade girl wrestles with

what it means to 'shine' for a black

girl in a predominantly white

community."




SEPTEMBER


..."a universal parable with a message

about unity, hope and social action."





OCTOBER



..."a love letter to making friends

from unexpected places."






NOVEMBER
..."the true and powerful story of

Portuguese diplomat Aristides de

Sousa Mendes who believed every

life is worth saving."



CURRENTLY ON HOLD:
..."each story splinters into the next 

in this brilliant spin on classic 

tropes that celebrates the power of

imagination and creativity during

uncertain times."




As always, I hung with William Steig's Brave Irene

when necessary. Irene Bobbin's determined effort to 

deliver the dress her suddenly-sick Mother made for

the Duchess - NO MATTER WHAT BEFALLS HER! -

never fails to steel my spine and return me to the

challenging task at hand.


Here at TeachingAuthors we've often celebrated

November, the month of giving Thanks, with

original Thankus.  Since sharing this short poetic

expression of gratitude in 2011 in my National

Day of Writing post, in a string of Novembers

I've personally thanked my treasured writers,

my eager students, my Mentors, my fellow

TeachingAuthors, my Children's Book World,

my grandson, Walter Annenberg, the Chicago

Cubs - and last February, I thanked my Sonny

Boy.

With heartfelt thanks I now add to this list:

             The Children's Book

             The perfect Rx

             for Silver Lining Seekers

             lost and losing Hope.

    [Note, unpoetically expressed:

     Cures weighty hearts, wobbly footing

     and wilting Spirits; administer

     when needed; unlimited dosage]


May you find the Right Book at just the Right

Time to keep you keepin' on!

Happy Thanksgiving!

Oh, and thank you, Janice Scully, at Salt

City Verse for hosting today's Poetry Friday.


Esther Hershenhorn

P.S.

In the spirit of Giving, please feel free to

share in the Comments a children's book

or two that made a difference in your Life

this past year.

Friday, August 15, 2025

My "Mary Oliver" Summer Days...

        

          "If you suddenly and unexpectedly feel joy,

           don't hesitate. Give in to it."

So wrote Mary Oliver in her now-so-relevant poem "Don't Hesitate."

I'm happy to report: I've spent many a day this summer giving in to

Joy, thanks to the writers who helped me make my life more "wild

and precious."

In June, self-proclaimed Joy Seeker and debut author Jamie 

Freedlund launched her original picture book Finding Joy

illustrated by her daughter Reese and Natalie Seaton.

As the book's back flap shares, Jamie's the founder of Mattea's Joy,

a non-profit organization that helps families with hospitalized kids

find joy in their journey.  Created to honor the memory of her 

daughter Mattea, Mattea's Joy provides care, connection and

community for anyone navigating the challenge of having a

hospitalized child.

Jamie donates a book to a Children's Hospital with each book

purchased.

Writing this children's book was Jamie's childhood dream come 

true.

Helping Jamie learn the picture book format, grow her story, revise her story, then guiding her as she took on the responsibility of independently publishing and marketing the book still has me dancing The Happy Dance.

The book's back cover declares, "Finding Joy is easy...if you know where to look!"

How true because...

...here I am in July, seated with my returning Manuscript

Workshop writers at the Landgrove Inn in Landgrove, Vermont,

enjoying yet another 5-star meal in a Joy-filled week.

I've facilitated this Workshop since 2016, honored to continue

its founder Barbara Seuling's unswerving commitment to

helping children's book creators tell their stories.

As always, by week's end my waistline expands (exponentially)

but more importantly, as always, so does my heart.

It gladdens me so, to see the writers I've loved seeding and 

feeding continue to grow and thus blossom - digging deeper,

revising and fine-tuning, so their singular stories connect

with their intended Young Readers.


In Finding Joy, Jamie Freedlund's Mattea learns: you find Joy 

when you give Joy.

Prior to the Workshop, I gifted each writer with a copy of

Tiffany Yates Martin's Intuitive Editing (FoxPrint Ink, 2020) - 

and - her slam-dunk brilliant Self-editing Checklist.

(Note: I declared Tiffany Yates Martin our "Visiting Author."

Her second book, The Intuitive Author (FoxPrint Ink, 2024),

served up numerous Food for Thought conversations.)


Channeling Mary Oliver, I also gifted each writer with the  

opportunity to express her writerly intentions...    

...and the reminder to keep an open heart.

Channeling my Positivity, I made sure each writer left

appropriately inked...

...with a flying wish and a prayer.



As luck would have it, though Summer's end approaches, 

I'm still giving in to Joy.

Overcoming awful, awful Despites, my writer Gail Aherne 

publishes her picture book Mouse and Bee, illustrated by

Lisa Blakeborough, this Fall, thanks to her successful

Kickstarter campaign that raised $12, 800 this past May.

The book began as a collaboration between Gail and her

dear friend Laura J. Foltz, but then the unimaginable

happened: Laura died unexpectedly.

Check out the Story Behind the Story on the Kickstarter

page to learn how Gail found the courage to seek a new

illustrator who could give Mouse and Bee a new life,

one that honored Laura's Spirit.

With each page Gail forwards as a preview, I add a step

or three to my Happy Dance.


The truth is, every teacher-student pairing is ripe for

rejoicing, no matter the season. 

Should you seek Joy on this Summer's day, click HERE

to listen to Mary Oliver read aloud her poem 

"The Summer Day" and HERE to listen to Kyndall

read aloud "Don't Hesitate."


Happy Giving In wherever you find Joy!

Esther Hershenhorn

p.s.

Thanks to Margaret at Reflections on the Teche for 

hosting today's Poetry Friday.

Friday, May 16, 2025

"It's all about the heartbeat..."

 This time around, each TeachingAuthor is answering the #1 Question

she receives most often from her students and Readers.

I knew mine by heart: What's the one thing about Writing for Children

you wish you knew when you first began?

Ironically, my tried-and-true response also answers the #1 Question I

ask myself when writing my own stories and/or reading the stories of

the writers I teach and coach: Why isn't this manuscript working?!

The answer to both questions?

Every story demands an Emotional Plotline if it's to resound in the

Reader's heart.

Thanks to Aristotle, I knew all about the PHYSICAL Plotline and how 

it structured a story.

The inciting event, the obstacles and struggles, the climax, the

surprise, the resolution.

And I excelled at determining my character's.

Unfortunately, however, after years of toiling on task, I learned 

that wasn't my job.

It's the character's!

Character determines plot. Period.

No more pulling the strings of my character a la Master Geppetto,

guiding actions and re-actions, assigning accompanying emotions

as he seeks to realize his dream, solve his problem, fulfill his need.

No more writing above my character's plotline, unplugged and

disconnected.

I needed to plumb the depths of my character's heart to learn the

WHY of his WHAT, his Or else..., so my story offered an 

EMOTIONAL Plotline.

What misbelief did his hurting heart hold?

What was his bedtime prayer when nighttime came?

I shared several exercises for mining a character's heart in a 2017

TeachingAuthors post, as did Ruth Vander Zee in our January, 

2018 interview and my fellow TA Carmela Martino in her 2017

post.

But, it also turns out, I needed to (bravely) plumb the depths of 

my own heart.

                                        

Marian Dane Bauer's What's My Story? A Young Person's Guide

to Writing Fiction (Clarion, 1992) took my writing to the Next

Level, illuminating a Truth I'd been unwilling to confront.

The writer needs to put his story into the story he's telling.  

That's the only way the Emotional Plotline can be all it must be

to do its job for the Reader.

Mind you: the writer needn't have experienced the actual

inciting incident; he needs only to reconnect with the feelings

that incident provoked, that "I know just how that feels"

sentiment.

In other words, the writer must first connect with the character

if the Reader is to do ths same, if the Reader is to have what

Jane Yolen called the Recognizable Sentiment.

"One heart in hiding, reaching out to one another," Katherine

Paterson wrote of her two characters Jeff Arons and Leslie

Burke in Bridge to Terabithia.

IMHO: this beautiful insight speaks of the character-writer

connection, too, as well as, ultimately, the character-Reader

connection.

            

Fortunately, it wasn't too late in my Writer's Journey to learn

the Why and Wherefore of the Emotional Plotline  (the true

inside story) vs. the Physical Plotline  (the outside actions.)

A story works as it should, as it must, when all three hearts

are inter-connected - the character's, the writer's, the Reader's.

Only then can the story's heart cause another's heart to beat

and burst.

I liken the connection to the three notes of a fine perfume -

the top note, middle note, bottom note - that allow the

singular scent to be known, register and be remembered.

My favorite Coach, Joe Maddon, said it best, though he was

writing about the game of baseball and how it should be

played: "It's all about the heartbeat."

Here's to keeping ours and our Readers' hearts beating!

Esther Hershenhorn

P.S.

Thanks to Ramona and PLEASURES FROM THE PAGE

for hosting today's Poetry Friday.


Friday, February 21, 2025

My I-Didn't-Know-It-Then-But-I-Know-It-Now Best Day Ever

I count my Blessings like a lawyer, on the quarter-hour basis.
That's how grateful I am.
So when tasked to choose My Best Day Ever from a bounty of Best Days
both personal and professional, I was downright flummoxed.
Confounding the matter was that my mind was already otherwise 
engaged, remembering, reflecting, fully-focused on My Best Boy and his 
upcoming March 4th Big Five-O Birthday.


One remembrance continued to pop up, and each time it did, I felt my 
heart smile:
my son at two, settled in my lap, uncharacteristically still, 
uncharacteristically quiet, as we found ourselves lost in a Mr. Rogers
episode.
Fog had descended upon the world of Make-Believe - an enormous 
close-to-the-ground cloud, Mr. Rogers explained, so that Bob Dog 
couldn't find his stone.
Jon's dark brown eyes widened at the wonder of it all.  When Lady 
Elaine used her boomerang to lift the fog, his mouth formed a perfect 
"O."
Whatever this thing was, with the snap of a finger it made 
everything and everyone DISappear, but then, just like that, begin to 
REappear! It was Pure Magic and my Best Boy wanted some.


By the time Mr. Rogers finished singing "Wishes Don't Make Things 
Come True," I heard myself whispering, "Yes! Yes!"
Bob Dog had found his stone but even better, I had found my 
long-ago Dream to someday, one day, write a children's book!
"Jon," I said, "Mommy's writing you a picture book, all about a little 
boy who wants to catch a piece of the fog.  You'll have it by your 
very next Birthday."

I now know: that day's promise of a book not only set me on a 
professional path I liken to my very own Yellow Brick Road.
It forced me to mine my pluck and grit, to keep marching forth in 
step with my Best Boy, sometimes even over, under and through, 
to recover my buried voice so I could realize my Dream.
It picked me up every time I fell; it chased away all doubts and 
fears.
True, the road was longer than first imagined; I greatly under-
estimated my arrival time.
(FYI: I honored my promise nineteen years later, though with a
different story. The Fogcatcher, alas, still awaits publication.)


But to my surprise, despite the Despites, not only did honoring
that promise gift me with countless unimagined unexpected
Kodak Moments - Best Days, if you will. It continues to do so.
Just like my sunny Sonny Boy, it's the gift that keeps on
giving.
Each time I added an appositive noun to my name - author,
award-winner, teacher, writing coach, colleague, friend and
amazingly, blogger, each time I advocated for children's
book creators, I could feel my heart smile. 
"Who would have thunk it?" I'd hear myself ask.

Hopefully, each Thanku I posted over the years adequately 
expressed my gratitude - for my "storied treasures," my 
"new berries," my mentors, our Children's Book World, my 
fellow bloggers and you, our Readers.

This one, however, long over-due, I'm tucking inside my
Best Boy's Birthday card.

       My Sunny Son Jon
       A Maker of Dreams Come True
       Marching forth always!

Here's to discovering your Best Days Ever!

Esther Hershenhorn
p.s.
Thanks to Laura Purdie Salas for hosting today's Poetry Friday.  


Friday, November 1, 2024

3 New Somethings for My Body, Mind and Spirit

At long last, I’ve set aside two afternoons each week to learn 

T’ai Chi!

Though only a Beginner, thanks to my venerated Chicago 

instructor Hau Kum Kneip, I now see how this low-impact 

exercise lives up to its description as “meditation in motion”

 – as well as – “medication in motion.”

I am besotted with the gentle movements within the short 

forms I’m working hard to learn.

Increased strength, flexibility and balance are the goals, 

for my body, of course, but even better, it turns out, for 

my mind and spirit.

Speaking of my mind,

in September I lost mine when my Lenova Yoga laptop’s cursor and

touch pad froze.

Tech-savvy I am not; in fact, I’m an honest-to-goodness Luddite

who relies on the help of experts.

Enter GOOGLE and You-Tube videos, once I correctly phrased the

question that addressed the issues.

“Who knew?” I heard myself exclaim as I learned about my

keyboard’s Function Keys (Fn) – and –  top row with all sorts of

varied icons dubbed “hot keys.”

I sure didn’t.

And I’ve only been typing on a computer since maybe 1997.

After unfreezing both touchpad and cursor, I celebrated by lighting

my keyboard.

Using GOOGLE and You-Tube videos to solve several of my

computer problems has gifted me with a new independence when

technological challenges arise.

As for matters of the spirit,

alas, an editor (or three) sent me what Richard Jackson called

“an admiring decline.”

In the past, I turned to children’s books for comfort and inspiration.

(Think: I think I can. I think I can. I think I can.)

Fortunately, Amy Gash and Elise Howard gathered nearly 400 wise

and inspiring words from children’s classics old and new in their

lovely new book Believe in the World, Wisdom for Grown-ups from

Children’s Books (Algonquin, 2024).

Several of the categorically-grouped quotes restored my spirit and

had me back on task in no time.

Indeed, writing this post proved the perfect Rx, too, for keepin’ me

keepin’ on.

Believe in the World included Yuyi Morales’ words from Dreamers

(Neal Porter, 2018):

                                    “Someday we will become something we

                                      haven’t even yet imagined.” 

Thanks to Patricia Franz at Reverie for hosting today’s Poetry 

Friday.

Here’s to your New Somethings! Feel free to share them.

Esther Hershenhorn


Friday, August 2, 2024

Hanging on to Hope...



In 1973, a man named Mr. Nadeau wrote beloved children’s  book 

author E.B. White requesting inspiration about humanity’s future. 

Mr. Nadeau’s world view was bleak and hopeless.

As Maria Popova wrote in her Marginalian blog’s introduction to 

the letter, which follows, Mr. White’s response “endures as a 

spectacular celebration of the human spirit.”

North Brookline, Maine

30 March, 1973

 Dear Mr. Nadeau:

 As long as there is one upright man, as long as there is one 

compassionate woman, the contagion may spread and the

scene is not desolate. Hope is the thing that is left to us, in 

a bad time. I shall get up Sunday morning and wind the 

clock, as a contribution to order and steadfastness.

Sailors have an expression about the weather: they say, the 

weather is a great bluffer. I guess the same is true of our 

human society — things can look dark, then a break shows 

in the clouds, and all is changed, sometimes rather 

suddenly. 

It is quite obvious that the human race has made a queer 

mess of life on this planet. But as a people we probably 

harbor seeds of goodness that have lain for a long time 

waiting to sprout when the conditions are right. Man’s 

curiosity, his relentlessness, his inventiveness, his ingenuity 

have led him into deep trouble. We can only hope that 

these same traits will enable him to claw his way out.

Hang on to your hat. Hang on to your hope. And wind 

the clock, for tomorrow is another day.

Sincerely,

E. B. White

                        

Alas, hanging on to Hope is easier said than done, in our Real 

World as well as in our Children’s Book World.

A group effort is oft required.

With that truth in mind, I invited five children’s book writers I’ve 

had the honor and Good Fortune to coach and teach to share 

One Golden Nugget that kept them keepin’ on… until they 

secured this past year representation by a literary agent.

Look for each of their names on an upcoming children’s book 

cover!

 ·    Becky Hohensee, represented by Essie White of the

     Storm Literary Agency, lives in Houma, Louisiana and 

     writes picture books. 

            Becky wishes she’d spent less time revising one manuscript 

            for several years, even though it was the one story she needed

            to tell.  “It zapped my creativity for a long time. Write a story,” 

            she advises, “share it when you believe it’s ready and let it go. 

            Work on something new. Exercise your writing muscles. And 

            don’t forget to reward yourself every now and then.”

·       ·   Chicago-area picture book writer and middle grade novelist        

            Sonya Kenkare signed with the 75th agent she queried,  

           Jackie Kruzie of Focused Artists.

            “Never give up,” she shares, “and keep batting at the fences.  

            All the rejections should be worn as a Badge of Honor. 😊

 ·      ·   Sara Crowe of Sara Crowe Literary represents Christal Presley 

           of Abingdon, Virginia, and her bounty of picture books.

     “Whatever genre you’re writing in,” Christal shares, “spend 

     equal time READING in. For reading in the same genre shows 

     you all the possibilities!” 

·    Melanie Uteg lives in Lake Forest, Illinois, writing chapter 

     books, plotting a middle grade book and reviewing bi-monthly 

     on her blog picture books, chapter books and middle grade 

     books that feature the best of science, humans, nature and 

     communities. She recently signed with Tina Schwartz who 

     founded The Purcell Agency.  

     “I believe all children matter,” Melanie responded. “Their 

     hearts. Their minds. Their voices. I believe getting to that core 

     is important as you pursue your path towards publishing. Get 

     out there and meet people – share your story and share your 

     purpose.” 

·    Fiona Wong of Los Angeles, represented by Ellen Goff at 

    HG Literary writes picture books, chapter books and middle 

    grade. 

    “Be curious,” she shared.  “Take opportunities to learn from 

    industry professionals, even if they’re discussing genres, craft 

    topics or age categories outside your focus. Hearing diverse 

    opinions and experiences can enrich your understanding of your 

    own craft, purpose and journey as a writer.” 

·   And how could I not invite my fellow TeachingAuthor blogger 

   and writer of fiction and nonfiction, Carmela Martino, to 

   share her Golden Nugget?! She, too, secured literary 

   representation this past year with Anjanette Barr of Dunham, 

   Literary, Inc.

         Carmela admitted it was “a stubborn belief that the stories I was 

         working on were worth sharing, and that they deserved to be in 

         the world, one way or another.”

         She confessed she was “so relieved and heartened to finally find 

         an agent who agreed with her!”


fe    I offer buckets of Hoorays! and Hurrahs! to our fellow 

       children’s book creators for both keepin’ on AND sharing a 

       Golden Nugget to keep US keepin’ on.

       Hoorays! and Hurrahs! hasten Hope.

   I  IMHO: Second Chances help us hang on to that Hope.

       And GOOD NEWS! The Andrea Brown Literary Agency is 

      offering such an opportunity – the ABLA Second Chance!

    “At ABLA we take pride in our collaborative approach to 

     agenting and we often share queries internally when we 

     believe a colleague is a better fit for the material.

     However, if a creator would like another opportunity to have 

     their project considered by ABLA after their first choice agent 

     passes, we invite you to submit your work to the 

     Second Chance Inbox. All our agents have access to this 

     inbox and will regularly look through it to discover new 

     material! If an agent finds something they are interested in, 

     they will reach out to that  creator directly.”

 Click here to learn the details so you can grab this Do Over. 

 

Thanks to former fellow TeachingAuthor blogger Laura Purdie 

Salas for hosting today’s Poetry Friday at Poems forTeachers. 

Laura, too, deserves an Hooray! and Hurrah! for her newest 

picture bookLine Leads the Way (Capstone, 2024).


Here’s to Hope and our hanging on! 








Esther Hershenhorn