Showing posts with label creative nonfiction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label creative nonfiction. Show all posts
Friday, March 22, 2019
Mentor Text from Master Storytellers
Posted by
Carla Killough McClafferty
I’m finishing up our TeachingAuthors series on mentor texts. It has been insightful to read the entries from my fellow TAs.
Naturally, the books that I’ve considered mentor texts are all nonfiction books. Writing nonfiction is not about stringing together a bunch of facts. It is about curating an endless number of facts, distilling them in a meaningful way that tells a powerful true story like it has never been told before.
In a way every nonfiction book I’ve ever read has been a mentor text. If I read a paragraph that is particularly striking, I reread it and consider how the author got the information across. But here I will point out a couple of authors and give examples from the books.
One of the authors that I have long admired is Russell Freedman (who passed away about a year ago). His books are serious but never boring. For example in the Newberry medal winning book Lincoln: A Photobiography, the first paragraph of the book says,
“Abraham Lincoln wasn’t the sort of man who could lose himself in a crowd. After all, he stood six feet four inches tall, and to top it off, he wore a high silk hat.”
These first two sentences give us a vivid picture of the man along with great facts.
In one of Freedman’s picture books, The Adventures of Marco Polo, he begins the book this way:
“As Marco Polo lay dying, friends and relatives gathered anxiously by his bedside and begged him to confess.”
In all of Freedman’s books, he carries the reader along with the serious-but-never-boring story.
Another author who was well-known for his fiction, but wrote nonfiction with equal success: Sid Fleischman (he passed away in 2010). Years ago Mr. Fleischman was a speaker at our SCBWI conference and I had the honor of driving him to the airport. I’ve never met a more polished and kind gentleman, nor one that was as humble as this very successful author of many books. I will never forget his graciousness to one and all. His books were like the man himself, brilliant and funny without even trying to be. At every turn, the texts of his books are witty and engaging. For example, the first paragraph of The Trouble Begins at 8: A Life of Mark Twain in the Wild, Wild West:
“Mark Twain was born fully grown, with a cheap cigar clamped between his teeth.”
Another example of a creative beginning is Fleischman’s book Sir Charlie Chaplin, The Funniest Man in the World which begins:
“In the pesky rain on a March Night in 1978, nitwit thieves huddled at the grave of Sir Charlie Chaplin and dug up the body of the world-famous comedian. They held it for ransom.”
His text is always accurate, yet entertaining.
As I write my nonfiction books, I keep in mind the great authors who have gone before me. I’ve learned from their mentor texts to start each book in a way that hooks the reader. Then even as I am telling a true story, I’ve got to hold their attention until the very last word on the very last page.
Carla Killough McClafferty
Friday, November 30, 2018
The Poetry of US ~ Grateful for Poetry Anthologies and Anthologists!
Posted by
April Halprin Wayland
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Howdy, Campers and Happy Poetry Friday! (The link to PF and my poem are below)
This month, TeachingAuthors posts have been about the things we're most grateful for in the world of words. (Except for Wednesday's post, which includes a hot picture book writing prompt called "Dialogue is Sriracha Sauce.") Bobbi is grateful that each of us has a voice, Mary Ann is grateful to her family of storytellers, Carla gives thanks for primary source documents which bring her research to life, and Carmela gives thanks to readers who make a huge difference in the life of a book.
Today I am grateful for poetry anthologies and the anthologists who create them. These works are a gift both to the poets in each collection and to their readers.
I've been honored to work with many of our finest anthologists. Today I'd like to bow deeply to a "well-loved, deeply-respected, and internationally-renown author and poetry anthologist," (and, may I add, a really fun guy), Paul B. Janeczko who just this month won NCTE's Award for Excellence in Poetry for Children.
This award, established in 1977, honors a living American poet for their aggregate work for children ages 3–13. Take a deep dive into his website and see what a remarkable writer and person Paul is.
In 2015, I was thrilled when Pat asked me to write a poem about San Diego Zoo for this book "(perhaps include some of its exotic species)?" So after correspondence with and phone calls to the zoo hoping to get a free behind-the-scenes tour or interview with an animal keeper (wouldn't you think?), I convinced my husband that for our wedding anniversary we needed to go on a two-hour $89/per person behind-the-scenes tour of the zoo. And so we went. (Yes, he's a keeper.)
What a fun day!
It's both exhilarating and terrifying to write for an editor. Many of my attempts are stiff, lifeless. Nonetheless, I sent Pat nine poems. One was about two pandas getting married (we saw part of a wedding at the zoo), one was from the POV of a child lost in the zoo (I was six years old), two were about an elephant getting a manicure (we saw this on the tour--it's an actual thing!), a poem titled GOD DISCOVERS THE SAN DIEGO ZOO (about the S.D. Zoo Corps program for teens), one about a surprise date at the zoo (art reflecting life), a take-off of Robert Frost's The Pasture set in the zoo ("you come, too"), a quick and quirky poem about the first female zoo director, and a more serious poem about the same director.
Pat picked the last poem. Anthologists are editors, parent figures, therapists, task masters, mentors and more. Pat is one of the most patient editors I've worked with, watering and weeding poems I didn't even know were growing inside me...and then showing me how to clean up their meter and meaning.
Over a period of months, we changed phlangers into wombats, we took zebras out of their stalls (they've never lived in stalls in the San Diego Zoo, according to the zoo's historians) and more. Here is my poem as it now appears in this marvelous (and visually delicious) collection:
Howdy, Campers and Happy Poetry Friday! (The link to PF and my poem are below)
This month, TeachingAuthors posts have been about the things we're most grateful for in the world of words. (Except for Wednesday's post, which includes a hot picture book writing prompt called "Dialogue is Sriracha Sauce.") Bobbi is grateful that each of us has a voice, Mary Ann is grateful to her family of storytellers, Carla gives thanks for primary source documents which bring her research to life, and Carmela gives thanks to readers who make a huge difference in the life of a book.
Today I am grateful for poetry anthologies and the anthologists who create them. These works are a gift both to the poets in each collection and to their readers.
I've been honored to work with many of our finest anthologists. Today I'd like to bow deeply to a "well-loved, deeply-respected, and internationally-renown author and poetry anthologist," (and, may I add, a really fun guy), Paul B. Janeczko who just this month won NCTE's Award for Excellence in Poetry for Children.
This award, established in 1977, honors a living American poet for their aggregate work for children ages 3–13. Take a deep dive into his website and see what a remarkable writer and person Paul is.
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| photo of Paul B. Janezko courtesy of Candlewick Press |
Thank you for all you have given us, Paul--you are deeply loved and you soooo deserve this award!
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And speaking of anthologies: National Geographic just published an anthology by another well-loved, deeply-respected, and internationally-renown author and poetry anthologist, former Children's Poet Laureate, J. Patrick Lewis, THE POETRY OF US: More than 200 poems that celebrate the people, places and passion of the United States (National Geographic)...............................................................................
What a fun day!
It's both exhilarating and terrifying to write for an editor. Many of my attempts are stiff, lifeless. Nonetheless, I sent Pat nine poems. One was about two pandas getting married (we saw part of a wedding at the zoo), one was from the POV of a child lost in the zoo (I was six years old), two were about an elephant getting a manicure (we saw this on the tour--it's an actual thing!), a poem titled GOD DISCOVERS THE SAN DIEGO ZOO (about the S.D. Zoo Corps program for teens), one about a surprise date at the zoo (art reflecting life), a take-off of Robert Frost's The Pasture set in the zoo ("you come, too"), a quick and quirky poem about the first female zoo director, and a more serious poem about the same director.
Pat picked the last poem. Anthologists are editors, parent figures, therapists, task masters, mentors and more. Pat is one of the most patient editors I've worked with, watering and weeding poems I didn't even know were growing inside me...and then showing me how to clean up their meter and meaning.
Belle Benchley
by April Halprin Wayland
I was the bookkeeper, that's all.
At noon I'd watch the zebras loll
I'd study wombats eating lunch
I really did not know that much
about the zoo.
I saw the llama wasn't well—
how did I know? It's hard to tell.
I pointed out a listless gnu
(for I read volumes about zoos.)
Some people swore our chief was rude—
depends upon your point of view.
(Recall he built this cageless place
which opened 1922).
It may be Dr. Wegeforth’s rage
that drove three zoo leaders away.
He marched to my desk, bent down and said:
"You try and run it—go ahead."
And so I did.
poem (c) 2018 April Halprin Wayland. All rights reserved.
Belle Benchley
by April Halprin Wayland
by April Halprin Wayland
I was the bookkeeper, that's all.
At noon I'd watch the zebras loll
I'd study wombats eating lunch
I really did not know that much
about the zoo.
I saw the llama wasn't well—
how did I know? It's hard to tell.
I pointed out a listless gnu
(for I read volumes about zoos.)
Some people swore our chief was rude—
depends upon your point of view.
(Recall he built this cageless place
which opened 1922).
It may be Dr. Wegeforth’s rage
that drove three zoo leaders away.
He marched to my desk, bent down and said:
"You try and run it—go ahead."
And so I did.
poem (c) 2018 April Halprin Wayland. All rights reserved.
Thank you for hosting PF at Carol's Corner today, Carol!
posted with gratitude by April Halprin Wayland with help from Eli, Monkey and Snot.
Friday, March 30, 2018
Wrapping Up Women's History Month
Posted by
Carmela Martino
I'm beginning this wrap up of our celebration of Women's History Month with a reminder for all of you to enter our giveaway of 30 People Who Changed the World: Fascinating Bite-Sized Essays from Award-Winning Writers (Seagrass Press), edited by Jean Reynolds, if you haven't already done so.
Carla announced the giveaway on Monday, when she posted a terrific interview with Jean Reynolds. But Carla was too modest to mention that her essay, "Radium Girls," is included in the book, which is why we chose to offer this giveaway in conjunction with Women's History Month. In the essay, subtitled "The Taste of Death," Carla shares the sad story of how female factory workers contracted radiation poisoning from painting watch dials with radium so that they'd glow in the dark. Maybe in a future post Carla will share what led to her writing this essay. My guess is, it may be connected to her research for her acclaimed nonfiction book Something Out of Nothing: Marie Curie and Radium.
Esther's Women's History Month post included a great list of resources on the topic. I'd like to add one more: a Nerdy Book Club post by Kate Hannigan listing 31 New Picture Book Biographies to Celebrate Women's History Month as part of the #31Women31Books campaign. Kate is also featuring an interview on her blog with Heather Lang, author of one of the 31 biographies as well as books about other notable women of history. You can read that interview here.
And don't forget about the Playing by Heart "Book Bag and Swag" giveaway I'm hosting for Women's History Month. You'll find all the details on this page of my website, along with a link to where you can download a free PDF excerpt of Playing by Heart. Don't delay. The giveaway ends tomorrow, March 31!
Be sure to check out this week's Poetry Friday Roundup hosted by Heidi Mordhorst at My Juicy Little Universe.
And remember to always Write with Joy!
Carmela
Monday, March 26, 2018
Interview with Jean Reynolds and Book Giveaway for 30 People Who Changed the World
Posted by
Carla Killough McClafferty
Today's post is an interview with editor, Jean Reynolds, and book giveaway for
It is my privilege to introduce you to our guest today. Jean E. Reynolds co-founded The Millbrook Press in 1989, where she served as Executive VP and Publisher. She developed Millbrook’s trade imprint, Roaring Brook Press, winner of two Caldecott awards.
30 People Who Changed the World:
Fascinating Bite-Sized Essays from Award-Winning Writers.
Instructions on how to enter the giveaway
for this book are at the end of this post.
It is my privilege to introduce you to our guest today. Jean E. Reynolds co-founded The Millbrook Press in 1989, where she served as Executive VP and Publisher. She developed Millbrook’s trade imprint, Roaring Brook Press, winner of two Caldecott awards.
Before founding Millbrook, she had been Editor-in-Chief of
Young People’s Publications at Grolier and Editor in Chief of The Book of
Knowledge and, prior to that, Senior Vice President / Editorial Director and a
member of the Board of Franklin Watts, Inc.
Now retired, more or less, she
edits a blog called The Nonfiction Minute consisting of daily postings of
400-word essays by 30 award-winning nonfiction writers for young readers. She has edited two books based on this blog, 30 People Who Changed the World, and 30 Animals That Share Our World.
In the spirit of full
disclosure, I’ve come to know Jean as an editor recently because I’m part of
the group of authors that make up iNK Think Tank, who produce The Nonfiction
Minute. Also, one of my essays appear in
30 People Who Changed the World.
Vicki Cobb first
started iNK Think Tank in 2009 when the Common Core Standards had just been implemented,
requiring more reading of nonfiction. A number of her fellow nonfiction writers
were pleased that the importance of their genre was being recognized by the
education community. But they also knew
that most teachers had very little awareness of the trove of excellent nonfiction
books related to their required curricula and that those books were actually sitting
idly on their school library shelves. Vicki approached a number of her favorite
award-wining nonfiction authors and convinced them to join with her in creating
a database aligning their books to the new Standards. They created a website, which launched under
the domain name of www.inkthinktank.com (now www.inkthinktank.org) in
October 2009. All 22 member-authors donated money to make it happen.
These authors used
their combined strength to purchase electronic equipment and learn how to do
two way virtual classroom visits. But as
they got to know each other, they all realized that they wanted to do something
more to introduce fine nonfiction writing to the classroom. Thus the idea of The Nonfiction Minute was
born. And this is the point where I was brought
into the organization. I was a
newly-retired editor who had worked with many of the iNK Think Tank authors
over the years. I know it’s hard to
believe that a group of authors voluntarily called in an editor, because as a
group we do tend to create a lot of work for a good author – but that’s what
they did!
The plan was for
each member of the iNK group, which had grown to more than 30 at this point, to
create multiple 400-word nonfiction essays with the intention of posting one
each day for use in the classroom. It
was my job to organize the effort, sometimes suggest the topics, edit the
articles, illustrate the articles with free materials, solicit and edit an mp3
of the author reading his/her essay, and prepare a description of the author’s
latest book to be included at the end of the essay. The first year, academic 2015-16, was a
gargantuan effort for all of us in that we were all in unfamiliar
territory. I had to learn how to work
not only as an editor but as a fact checker and copyeditor – the latter being
the most difficult. I had had a staff of
copyeditors overseeing my work for decades, and it was very difficult to not
only edit but copyedit the essays.
Fortunately I was working with authors who were the best of the best in
the field, but I literally wore out my Chicago
Manual of Style.
I was worried that
without the power of a major publishing house who was going to pay an author on
the completion of the work, there were no carrots to keep the very busy
volunteer authors on track. But to my
delight, I discovered that their carrot was not money at all, but rather their
true belief in what we were giving to children.
There may be other anthologies in the children’s book market – although
the only ones that occur to me now are poetry collections in which different
poets are paid by the piece to be included in a single volume. But I don’t believe that anything else exists
that is based on the premise of good nonfiction writing. I think such a volume would be very difficult
to put together because the selection would be so subjective. Also, the expense of paying for 30 essays
would be major. Remember that all of our
authors are doing this without payment, which makes this book possible.
One of the many unique things about 30 People is that each of the 30
biographical essays is done with a different style and different approach. It was an interesting experience for me as
an editor transformed into an author to work with our very excellent copyeditor
at Seagrass. Coping with the work of 30
different authors was a real challenge for a copyeditor whose job is to assure
uniformity of style -- and it was kind of fun for me as the author-once-children’s-book-editor
to have to argue on behalf on inconsistency!
Josalyn Moran, the Seagrass publisher who discovered The Nonfiction
Minute online chose the topic. She felt
that introductions to new subjects or new details about old subjects would be
helpful to upper elementary and middle school students who were involved in the
inevitable assignment “Write an x-hundred word biography of a person you
admire.” Our Nonfiction Minutes fill
that bill beautifully. So for me, who
was familiar with all of the Minutes, it was a question of picking 30 out of
the 60 or so biographical Minutes. I
wanted to use not only all different approaches by different authors, but also
a wide variety of subjects balanced between the well-known and the virtually
unknown. I wanted people from different
eras, which we definitely achieved by including Imhotep of 2600 BCE and
present-day Malala Yousafzai! Also we
wanted a balance between male and female, and of course, racial diversity. By
the time these factors were all considered, the choices were pretty obvious.
Because the Minutes had been published previously and were still
available for free on line, I wanted to add some additional factors and the
logical thing to do was to help kids who were interested in knowing more to get
started on their research by adding a Find Out More section to each Minute. So I went back to the authors (who had
already done a great deal of in-depth research on their respective biographees)
and asked them to give me the title of the best book on their subject, the URL
of the best introductory website, and the link to an interesting U-tube, all of
which were then included at the end of each Minute.
As the book came together, I was very happy that I had been such a
strict taskmaster about the length of the minutes. As you know, I was adamant about the 400 word
limit, and that helped the design flow very smoothly because our wonderful
designer Marc Cheshire could perform his magic on the total layout even before
he had the final text, knowing in advance how much room to allow for each
minute. I’m afraid that many of my free
illustrations which worked well on a computer screen were not high enough
resolution to work in a book. So we had
a lot of scrambling to find additional art.
It was wonderful to have professional researchers at the publisher
working on it rather than me. Like my
copyediting knowledge, my picture research is rusty. I’ve been working with and
selecting pictures for years, but always with lots of help from professional
researchers. Also, the publisher gave us
a generous budget for pictures, whereas my budget for the illustrations for the
online Minutes was zero.
One problem was that the author’s book promotion could not be placed at
the end of each Minute as it was on line.
I felt that information about each author was a must. I lobbied hard for eight full book pages for
author bios, photos, and book mentions.
We even included the author’s home town and email addresses. I had to keep making suggestions about what
photos we could cut, or even text we could cut to keep that eight-page section
in tact – but it remained. I felt that the
volunteer authors needed some sort of major recognition in the book, not only
for providing the one or two Minutes contained in the book, but for the scores
of other Minutes they have produced over the past few years.
So all in all, editing this book and working with a publisher as an
author rather than being the publisher myself was a really interesting
experience. Because she knew my
extensive background, I think the editor, Josalyn, probably included me in a lot
more decisions that the average author might have been able to participate
in. We consulted on the title and
subtitle and cover design and cover copy – actually publishing details that I
knew a lot more about than being an author.
It was fun.
One final thought on the topic.
I think captivating is the operative word in that question. I think in order to captivate your reader,
your topic has to have captivated you. In
that case, you do the best you can to share your enthusiasm.
Many years ago, I read an article that really helped form my love for
what is called narrative nonfiction.
(Narrative nonfiction means that the author is really telling an
interesting story and not presenting a series of facts and figures about the
subject.) The article, which probably
was in an educational magazine, quoted two articles on the VietNam war. The first was from a well-known American
history text book, and I remember it began: “Vietnam is a Southeast Asian
country on the South China Sea.” In the course of about 300 words it described
the location and climate of VietNam, the years the war lasted, a bit about why
the US was a combatant country. I think
the article lost me on the opening sentence.
The second article was from Time Magazine and it began with two
American soldiers lying under some jungle foliage with artillery fire from the
North Vietnamese passing just over their heads.
They had me!
I went on to read the rest of the dramatic story of what brought these
Americans to this point, and the subsequent story, I learned a lot about
VietNam.
In a widespread educational test, the text book article was given to a
large group of students and the Time article was given to a different
group. Both were tested on the
information two weeks later. The
textbook group remembered very very little, while the Time group could repeat
parts of the story and actually remembered facts about VietNam and the course
of the war.
Our aim in the Minutes is to have our writers tell an interesting
enough story that our readers may mention something about it later on the
playground, or talk about it at home over dinner.
Of course there are many other things about writing good nonfiction,
but none are more important than captivating your reader.
I am not a teacher. That’s a
very hard job, and I don’t think that I’d be very good at it. But I do spend a lot of time talking with
teachers about how they work with kids and books. As I mentioned earlier, 30 People is a great
resource if there are students having trouble finding a topic for a
biographical essay. Also, I understand
that some teachers are using the individual Minutes for (shudder) test prep.
We have added a new Transfer to Teaching section for each
minute published this season which has a custom page with creative ideas for
using the Minute in the classroom. Organized by subject area and focused
on critical thinking and problem-solving skills, these ideas have been created
and organized by certified school librarian Karen Sterling, an iNK Think Tank
member. Each Minute is also categorized according to the Library of
Congress Subject Authority headings to increase access points for
users. So my suggestion would be for a teacher interested in specific
ideas for any of the minutes in the book, use the archives on the
NonfictionMinute.org website to find any of the Minutes in the book and click
on the T2T link.
Are there more books like this one in the future?
Absolutely. 30 Animals Who Share
Our World is being released by Seagrass on April 4, 2018. This book has some fascinating science, as
well as some delightful stories about animal behavior. This one has a huge variety of minutes
ranging from a poetry collection in praise of vultures to the commuting habits
of a British cat. You’ll learn a lot,
but this one is really fun!
We’re talking about
a future STEM-themed book, but it is not yet under contract.
Thank you, Jean Reynolds!
Carla Killough McClafferty
Carla Killough McClafferty
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Monday, July 31, 2017
A Long View from Carla's Office
Posted by
Carla Killough McClafferty
We TeachingAuthors are writing about the view from our
offices during these long, hot summer days.
I look out my office window and see a flowerbed full of beautiful
black-eyed Susan flowers. Butterflies
gently land on one bloom, then another.
Hummingbirds flit around the feeder on and off all day.
| Outside my office window. |
I’ve written here before that I’m writing a new book about
the enslaved people who lived and worked at Mount Vernon. The working title is BURIED LIVES: THE
ENSLAVED PEOPLE OF GEORGE WASHINGTON’S MOUNT VERNON. Holiday House will publish it in the fall of
2018. This summer I’ve been working on
revisions on the book.
In BURIED LIVES I’m concentrating on the lives of about six
specific enslaved people. I’ve gotten to
know them really well over the last two years.
While rewriting the same paragraphs over and over to get them right—not
good enough, but right—I’ve looked out at those black-eyed Susan flowers a lot
this summer. I’ve watched them sway in
the hot breeze, but often I didn’t see them at all. Instead in my mind’s eye I’ve seen Mount
Vernon as it was in the 18th century. I’ve imagined sweeping the stairs with
Caroline; working in the stable with Peter; making perfect stitches with Oney Judge; riding with William Lee
during the Revolution; caring for George Washington’s clothes with Christopher
Shields, and cooking in an open hearth with Hercules.
As a nonfiction writer, the people I write about must be
real to me before they can come to life through words on the page. The enslaved people whose lives I’ve been
studying are very real to me. I can’t
wait to introduce readers to them.
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