Monday, November 29, 2010
Teaching Books for Teaching Authors
Posted by
mary ann rodman
This is part one to a question posed awhile back by reader Sandra Stiles. Sandra's question was so thorough it will take more than post to answer.
Sandra has a one hour after school writing class, and basically wanted to know how to keep the mojo going, for both herself and her students. Sandra didn't mention how old her students are, but the answer is the same whether they are eight or eighteen. Those of you have been reading this blog awhile already know what I'm going to say; read, read, read!
There is an endless selection of books on writing and teaching writing, some better than others. Here is my "go to" list (in no particular order).
Bird by Bird by Anne Lamotte. This book is for me and definitely not the students. This is what gets my mojo going. Anne reminds me (in no uncertain, and sometimes very blunt language) that writing is a process, that it's OK to write lousy drafts and that some days (lots of days) the magic just doesn't happen.
What's Your Story?: A Young Person's Guide to Writing Fiction by Marion Dane Bauer
The title pretty much tells you want this book is--how to write both long and short fiction--from the ground up. Although written for middle school age students, this was my bible when writing Yankee Girl. That this book has been in print for nearly 20 years makes it a classic in my opinion.
Paper Lightening: Prewriting Activities that Spark Creativity and Help Students Write Effectively by Darcy Pattison
Aimed at teachers of writing for elementary and middle school teachers, this book makes a terrific companion for Bauer's book. Where Bauer lays our the blueprint for writing, Pattison's backs up that blueprint with dozens of writing activities to jump start the writer's brain and to write in more colorful and creative ways. This book was published in 2008, and I forsee it still in print in 2008.
Anything written by Ralph Fletcher. Fletcher has a series of short (under 125 pages) of how-to-books written for students, each on a different aspect of writing. These include How to Write Your Life Story, A Writer's Notebook: Unlocking the Writer Within You, Live Writing: Breathing Life Into Your Words, How Writer's Work: Finding a Process that Works for You, Poetry Matters: Writing a Poem from the Inside Out. Craft Lessons is a virtual encyclopedia of specialized exercises for every age group for kindergarden and up.
As I was re-checking these titles on Amazon, I found that Fletcher has a new book our this past spring,
Pyrotechnics on the Page. I'm ordering my copy as soon as i finish writing this blog!
Although I am not a poet, I am working on a verse novel, which means I am reading a lot of poetry how-to's. Poemcrazy by Pam Woolridge is written for adults, but easily understood by the middle grade poet.
I'm also reading books by Ted Kooser and Mary Oliver, however the techniques here are best distilled through the teacher.
OK, fellow writers, back to the verse novel. I had a big breakthrough over the holidays and I don't want to lose my big 'mo.
Part two to Sandra's question next time.
Posted by Mary Ann Rodman
Sandra has a one hour after school writing class, and basically wanted to know how to keep the mojo going, for both herself and her students. Sandra didn't mention how old her students are, but the answer is the same whether they are eight or eighteen. Those of you have been reading this blog awhile already know what I'm going to say; read, read, read!
There is an endless selection of books on writing and teaching writing, some better than others. Here is my "go to" list (in no particular order).
Bird by Bird by Anne Lamotte. This book is for me and definitely not the students. This is what gets my mojo going. Anne reminds me (in no uncertain, and sometimes very blunt language) that writing is a process, that it's OK to write lousy drafts and that some days (lots of days) the magic just doesn't happen.
What's Your Story?: A Young Person's Guide to Writing Fiction by Marion Dane Bauer
The title pretty much tells you want this book is--how to write both long and short fiction--from the ground up. Although written for middle school age students, this was my bible when writing Yankee Girl. That this book has been in print for nearly 20 years makes it a classic in my opinion.
Paper Lightening: Prewriting Activities that Spark Creativity and Help Students Write Effectively by Darcy Pattison
Aimed at teachers of writing for elementary and middle school teachers, this book makes a terrific companion for Bauer's book. Where Bauer lays our the blueprint for writing, Pattison's backs up that blueprint with dozens of writing activities to jump start the writer's brain and to write in more colorful and creative ways. This book was published in 2008, and I forsee it still in print in 2008.
Anything written by Ralph Fletcher. Fletcher has a series of short (under 125 pages) of how-to-books written for students, each on a different aspect of writing. These include How to Write Your Life Story, A Writer's Notebook: Unlocking the Writer Within You, Live Writing: Breathing Life Into Your Words, How Writer's Work: Finding a Process that Works for You, Poetry Matters: Writing a Poem from the Inside Out. Craft Lessons is a virtual encyclopedia of specialized exercises for every age group for kindergarden and up.
As I was re-checking these titles on Amazon, I found that Fletcher has a new book our this past spring,
Pyrotechnics on the Page. I'm ordering my copy as soon as i finish writing this blog!
Although I am not a poet, I am working on a verse novel, which means I am reading a lot of poetry how-to's. Poemcrazy by Pam Woolridge is written for adults, but easily understood by the middle grade poet.
I'm also reading books by Ted Kooser and Mary Oliver, however the techniques here are best distilled through the teacher.
OK, fellow writers, back to the verse novel. I had a big breakthrough over the holidays and I don't want to lose my big 'mo.
Part two to Sandra's question next time.
Posted by Mary Ann Rodman
Saturday, November 27, 2010
Announcing Our Book Giveaway Winner!
Posted by
JoAnn Early Macken
Congratulations to Jennie of Biblio File, whose comment was chosen at random from the eligible entries for the autographed copy of Ann Angel's new biography Janis Joplin: Rise Up Singing. Thanks to all who submitted writing advice! Watch for more Guest Teaching Author interviews and book giveaways!
Friday, November 26, 2010
A Perfect Day to Kidnap Mom--a different kind of Thanksgiving poem for Poetry Friday
Posted by
April Halprin Wayland
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Happy After-Thanksgiving!
Before running out the door to buy-buy-buy, sit back and watch The Story of Stuff. At least watch the first seven minutes. Really.
But...if you really want something--how 'bout a book? You may still have time to participate in our book giveaway! To qualify, your entry must be posted by 11 p.m. Friday, November 26, 2010 (Central Standard Time). Here's JoAnn's interview with the author, Ann Angel. Before entering our contest, please read our Book Giveaway Guidelines.
You may be in the middle of NaNoWriMo. Carmela has commented on this and how she's modified NaNoWriMo to fit her life. If you're writing--however that looks in your life--my hat's off to you! Participating in this year's Poem A Day Challenge absolutely changed my life. It changed so much, in fact, that I've been writing a poem a day for 236 days...or seven months and 22 days (and sending each one to my friend Bruce as he sails around the world).
So here's a poem I wrote this week. Not a kid's poem. Just a poem from me--to you. I hope your
Thanksgiving was warm and wonderful.
A PERFECT DAY TO KIDNAP MOM
Happy After-Thanksgiving!
Before running out the door to buy-buy-buy, sit back and watch The Story of Stuff. At least watch the first seven minutes. Really.
But...if you really want something--how 'bout a book? You may still have time to participate in our book giveaway! To qualify, your entry must be posted by 11 p.m. Friday, November 26, 2010 (Central Standard Time). Here's JoAnn's interview with the author, Ann Angel. Before entering our contest, please read our Book Giveaway Guidelines.
You may be in the middle of NaNoWriMo. Carmela has commented on this and how she's modified NaNoWriMo to fit her life. If you're writing--however that looks in your life--my hat's off to you! Participating in this year's Poem A Day Challenge absolutely changed my life. It changed so much, in fact, that I've been writing a poem a day for 236 days...or seven months and 22 days (and sending each one to my friend Bruce as he sails around the world).
So here's a poem I wrote this week. Not a kid's poem. Just a poem from me--to you. I hope your
Thanksgiving was warm and wonderful.
A PERFECT DAY TO KIDNAP MOM
by April Halprin Wayland
This morning I woke with a huge burlap sack of guilt
about not being in town
with my 88-year-old mother
for Thanksgiving.
Today was a perfect day to kidnap her.
I poked around the internet, found an easy hike—
terrific, except it was in Thousand Oaks,
which always feels terribly far, like Romania, to Mom.
I phoned her:
“Pretend I’m Alan Alda
and I’m inviting you somewhere, okay?”
Okay, she said—except for the Thousand Oaks part.
She would have gone to Thousand Oaks for Alan Alda.
“I’ll ring you back,” I said.
I hunted more. I found
Malibu Creek State Park.
We drove north on Pacific Coast Highway
on this after-rain day—
everything green and blue and glisten-y,
Mom oohing and ahhing as we cruised past the grey-blue Pacific.
Crushing layers of oak leaves,
we saw a huge blue heron, still as a tree.
Then it lifted,
its wings spread wide as awnings.
its wings spread wide as awnings.
We saw a rabbit, which, yes, had a white tail.
We saw ground squirrels
popping out of holes like an arcade game,
and crowds of crows.
“Crows remember a human that’s mistreated them,” I told her.
“And one crow will describe him so other crows keep their distance—though they’ve never seen him before,” I said.
“How do you say ‘a big nose and receding hairline’ in crow?” she asked.
We saw three deer.
The first, reddish, made its way down the slope towards a dry creek bed.
The others, grey, stately; turned to stare.
Later, they bounded across a field and up a hill—as beautiful as the flight of the heron.
It was a short walk.
Mom and I, hand-in-hand.
She: bending over more than I remember,
grateful to be healthy,
happy to be outside, surprised by this day.
Me: breathing rain-dampened oak,
surprised, too
by a different kind of thanksgiving.
poem & drawing (c) 2010 April Halprin Wayland
Wednesday, November 24, 2010
A NEW Thanksgiving tradition?
Posted by
Esther Hershenhorn

Shelves overflow with books about turkeys, Pilgrims and family gatherings.
Bloggers and columnists laud keeping a Gratitude Journal.
Reading, sharing and modeling Debbie Levy’s The Year of Goodbyes (Hyperion, 2010), however, could start a whole new tradition for a holiday that celebrates family, friends and life.
In her introduction, Debbie Levy writes,
“This book is based on another book – not a library book, or a bookstore book, or even a typed manuscript. It was a book written by hand and owned by my mother when she lived in Germany as a girl. The year was 1938. In her own language, German, the book was known as a poesiealbum (po-eh-ZEE Album). In English you could call it a poetry album.”
Poesiealbums weren’t hastily created. “Usually,” Levy shares in her introduction, “you took your friend’s
album home overnight and used your best handwriting, and maybe also colored pencils, to create a lasting impression. Your illustrations were likely to include symbols of good luck, such as ladybugs, piles of coins, horseshoes, fly mushrooms, four-leaf clovers, hearts, and chimney sweeps and their tools. You might further decorate your page with oblaten (o-BLAH-ten), stickers that girls collected and traded.”
Levy uses her mother Jutta’s discovered album - the actual poetic entries, art and oblaten of her friends sharing their twelfth year in Hamburg, Germany, from January through November – as the springboard for telling, in poetic verse, the true story of the Salzberg family’s last year in Germany. Adolph Hitler and the Nazi Party reigned supreme. As public persecution of Jews and thus Jutta’s family increased daily, escape to family in America proved the only way out. Excerpts from Jutta’s diary share the Salzberg’s eventual safe passage to New York. Jutta’s sister Ruth’s entry closes the book.
“Whoever loves you more than me
Should write behind me, certainly.”
Levy created The Poesiealbum Project on her blog, The Year of Goodbyes.
She invites readers of all ages to send their own pages.
Perhaps six lines about a wrong in the world we'd want to make better, someone who inspired us or others to face adversity or fear.
Perhaps a three-line goodbye, to someone important.
What treasured possessions would we pack in our one suitcase, were we forced to leave home?
What lines would we write to tell about another's Holocaust experience?
Jutta created her poesiealbum over the course of a year. She looks back at the handwriting, at the poems, at the images, and abracadabra, she's with her friends - Cilly Seligmann, Eva Rosenbaum, Ellen Berger, Elli Lipka. Aunts, uncles, neighbors, grandparents, the Bar Kochba Gymnastics Club, the Jewish School for Girls. All are there in Jutta's poesiealbum, some seventy-two years later, thankfully alive.
Writing words that could be read many years later so the world might know our story?
That's the stuff of new (Thanksgiving) traditions. See the Writing Workout below for details.
[And don't forget to enter our latest TeachingAuthor book giveaway here for a chance to win an autographed copy of Ann Angel's acclaimed biography Janis Joplin: Rise Up Singing.]
Happy Thanksgiving!
Esther Hershenhorn
WRITING WORKOUT
Why not create a Thanksgiving Poesiealbum of sorts with those who gather at your table, around your tv or on the front porch tomorrow.Ask guests to come prepared to note the day, the gathering, the celebration - with a poem, a photograph, a stamp, a picture that reveals something special about them, perhaps something for which they are grateful.
Assign each guest a page. Note the guest's name, age. Be sure to record the date.
Tuck this year's album safely away, leaving room for others to follow.
Monday, November 22, 2010
In Thanksgiving
Posted by
Jeanne Marie Grunwell Ford
Confession time. Thanksgiving has always been my least favorite -- I'd go so far as to way most dreaded --holiday (apart from Valentine's Day in my many Valentine-less years). For one thing, I went to a high school with a lousy football team and a college that celebrates Homecoming during lacrosse season. The Colts fled Baltimore in the dead of night when I was in eighth grade, and then I moved to Rams-less L.A. In short... I am not a football fan. I am a fan of eating, but not of cooking, cleaning, or calories. (And Carmela probably knows the Italian tradition of serving a complete turkey dinner in addition to a pasta feast!) One of my favorite Thanksgivings ever was spent alone, under a quilt, with a book.
However, now I have kids and no option to opt out (or even eat out). My five-year-old is engaged in a daily countdown, and each day she has added at least three decorations to our dining room. The vegetarian/vegan portion of the menu is mostly complete, the wheelchair ramp is at the ready for my father (shh -- we won't tell him how steep it is!), and the steam-in-bag vegetables are safely ensconced in the freezer.
This week my kids have the craziest school schedule ever -- early dismisssal, late start, days off... Can I say how thankful I am for kind neighbors? I took my daughter yesterday to the local library to stock up for our week of school-lite. I think 30 books and movies might get us through the week. (Half of them, I must confess, are for me.)
My kids have been talking a lot about what they're grateful for -- family, friends, toys, green paint (long story). As for me, I would add teachers, warmth, comfort, joy, and one more important thing. A major criterion (confession #2) that drew me to the writing life was the blessed solitude of it all. No conference calls, no office politics, no outsized egos. Well, solitude is grand, but sometimes community is even better. Thank YOU, and Happy Thanksgiving to all!
And don't forget to enter our latest Teaching Author book giveaway here.
However, now I have kids and no option to opt out (or even eat out). My five-year-old is engaged in a daily countdown, and each day she has added at least three decorations to our dining room. The vegetarian/vegan portion of the menu is mostly complete, the wheelchair ramp is at the ready for my father (shh -- we won't tell him how steep it is!), and the steam-in-bag vegetables are safely ensconced in the freezer.
This week my kids have the craziest school schedule ever -- early dismisssal, late start, days off... Can I say how thankful I am for kind neighbors? I took my daughter yesterday to the local library to stock up for our week of school-lite. I think 30 books and movies might get us through the week. (Half of them, I must confess, are for me.)
My kids have been talking a lot about what they're grateful for -- family, friends, toys, green paint (long story). As for me, I would add teachers, warmth, comfort, joy, and one more important thing. A major criterion (confession #2) that drew me to the writing life was the blessed solitude of it all. No conference calls, no office politics, no outsized egos. Well, solitude is grand, but sometimes community is even better. Thank YOU, and Happy Thanksgiving to all!
And don't forget to enter our latest Teaching Author book giveaway here.
Friday, November 19, 2010
Book Giveaway and Guest Teaching Author Interview with Ann Angel!
Posted by
JoAnn Early Macken
The Teaching Authors are happy to present an interview with our good friend and Guest Teaching Author Ann Angel. To celebrate Ann's appearance on our blog, we're giving away an autographed copy of her new book Janis Joplin: Rise Up Singing. Booklist and School Library Journal both gave it starred reviews, and the Cooperative Children’s Book Center named it a Book of the Week. To enter the drawing, see the instructions at the end of this post.
Since then, Ann has written many young adult biographies, including her most recent, Janis Joplin: Rise Up Singing. She served as contributing editor for the highly acclaimed Such a Pretty Face: Short Stories About Beauty and is working on more young adult fiction. A graduate of Vermont College’s MFA program in Writing for Children and Young Adults, Ann lives in Wisconsin with her family and teaches creative writing at Mount Mary College in Milwaukee.
Welcome, Ann! How did you become a Teaching Author?
I was a journalism teacher at a local two year college when I first started to publish articles and then books. Teaching gave me the security of an income and so I always did this part time. But my writing wasn't getting where I wanted it to go, so I returned to school for an MFA in creative writing at Vermont College and graduated in 1999. After that, I became a full-time professor at Mount Mary College, where I've taught since shortly before 1990 (so long ago that I don't recall the year I actually began) when the college created a graduate program in writing. I teach creative fiction and nonfiction there, along with Teaching Author JoAnn Macken.
What's a common problem or question your students have, and how do you address it?
Students tend to stop story to explain or describe. I give them the same sage advice I received from renowned author Norma Fox Mazer at Vermont College. Use the details you've already placed in the setting as props, filter them through your primary character, and you'll create a story that moves forward while also creating voice and tone in the story.
How can teachers use your books in the classroom?
My books are probably great resources for teachers who wish to use literature while dealing with issues of self-esteem, self-image and bullying. Such A Pretty Face: Short Stories About Beauty offers teens a variety of perspectives on how teens view real beauty vs. the image of beauty that advertising offers. It surprised me when I finished Janis Joplin: Rise Up Singing and stepped back from it a bit to realize that this book, while nonfiction, also deals with issues of beauty, fitting in, and self-esteem. Through both books, I've come to realize that perceptions of beauty play a huge role in bullying. Bullies pick on people because of their differences, and so some get bullied because we don't have the sort of looks the rest of the culture admires or because we have too much of the looks admired in a culture. Stories in Such A Pretty Face certainly deal with coping in these instances. And Janis's story is so clearly one of a woman who rose above bullying with her voice.
Another book I wrote, Robert Cormier: Author of the Chocolate War, offers some tremendous insights into book challenges, censorship, and one author's efforts to fight censorship. Ironically, although he died in 2000, Cormier remains one of the most censored authors of the previous decade and continues to be listed as one of the top ten most censored authors of the year.
Can you share a funny or interesting story about how you got interested in writing?
I don't recall ever not writing. It's as if I was born to tell stories. I even have the first story--illustrated--that I ever wrote. It's a pencil drawing from about first or second grade where I drew my whole family and then wrote characteristics above each person. For my oldest sister, I wrote, "Katie yells a lot." For a little sister, I wrote, "Lulu cries a lot." Over my own head I wrote "I help the most." I look at that and think I was a fiction writer in the beginning.
When I go to schools to talk about writing, I often talk about how I choose my writing topics to focus on issues kids face. I can be talking about censorship and bullying or self-image issues, and inevitably a student will raise his or her hand and ask me, "Do you have any pets?"
For the record, I have a wicked little cat named Sparkie who fits her name perfectly.
Why do you write biographies for teens?
There is so much we can learn from entering the space of another person's life. It allows us to see how others think and behave, and it gives us a glimpse into the human condition in a way that is so real. We can learn from the lives of others. For instance, Janis Joplin was my role model. She gave me the courage to stop following along with the crowd and to do my own thing. Her death became my cautionary tale.
Would you share a favorite writing exercise for our readers?
The title of this exercise is "Who Is Listening?" Turn on the radio or turn on your iPod or click on music you've never heard before. As you listen to the song, freewrite and create a character listening to this song at the same time. As the song plays, describe the character and setting. Now listen to the song again and describe how this character is responding to the music and why. Would this character feel differently about this song if s/he weren't also dealing with ________?
Readers, before entering our contest, please read our Book Giveaway Guidelines. Then, for a chance to win an autographed copy of Ann Angel's new book Janis Joplin: Rise Up Singing, post a comment to today's blog post telling us some sage advice you received about writing and who gave it to you. To qualify, your entry must be posted by 11 p.m. Friday, November 26, 2010 (Central Standard Time). The winner will be chosen in a random drawing and announced by 11 p.m., Saturday, November 27, 2010.
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Ann Angel believes it was amazing fortune that brought Janis Joplin’s music and style into her life. As a teen, Ann preferred writing bad poetry and drawing to Janis’s songs over following along with the popular girls. That same influence encouraged Ann to live her own life without compromise.Since then, Ann has written many young adult biographies, including her most recent, Janis Joplin: Rise Up Singing. She served as contributing editor for the highly acclaimed Such a Pretty Face: Short Stories About Beauty and is working on more young adult fiction. A graduate of Vermont College’s MFA program in Writing for Children and Young Adults, Ann lives in Wisconsin with her family and teaches creative writing at Mount Mary College in Milwaukee.
Welcome, Ann! How did you become a Teaching Author?
I was a journalism teacher at a local two year college when I first started to publish articles and then books. Teaching gave me the security of an income and so I always did this part time. But my writing wasn't getting where I wanted it to go, so I returned to school for an MFA in creative writing at Vermont College and graduated in 1999. After that, I became a full-time professor at Mount Mary College, where I've taught since shortly before 1990 (so long ago that I don't recall the year I actually began) when the college created a graduate program in writing. I teach creative fiction and nonfiction there, along with Teaching Author JoAnn Macken.
What's a common problem or question your students have, and how do you address it?
Students tend to stop story to explain or describe. I give them the same sage advice I received from renowned author Norma Fox Mazer at Vermont College. Use the details you've already placed in the setting as props, filter them through your primary character, and you'll create a story that moves forward while also creating voice and tone in the story.
How can teachers use your books in the classroom?
My books are probably great resources for teachers who wish to use literature while dealing with issues of self-esteem, self-image and bullying. Such A Pretty Face: Short Stories About Beauty offers teens a variety of perspectives on how teens view real beauty vs. the image of beauty that advertising offers. It surprised me when I finished Janis Joplin: Rise Up Singing and stepped back from it a bit to realize that this book, while nonfiction, also deals with issues of beauty, fitting in, and self-esteem. Through both books, I've come to realize that perceptions of beauty play a huge role in bullying. Bullies pick on people because of their differences, and so some get bullied because we don't have the sort of looks the rest of the culture admires or because we have too much of the looks admired in a culture. Stories in Such A Pretty Face certainly deal with coping in these instances. And Janis's story is so clearly one of a woman who rose above bullying with her voice.
Another book I wrote, Robert Cormier: Author of the Chocolate War, offers some tremendous insights into book challenges, censorship, and one author's efforts to fight censorship. Ironically, although he died in 2000, Cormier remains one of the most censored authors of the previous decade and continues to be listed as one of the top ten most censored authors of the year.
Can you share a funny or interesting story about how you got interested in writing?
I don't recall ever not writing. It's as if I was born to tell stories. I even have the first story--illustrated--that I ever wrote. It's a pencil drawing from about first or second grade where I drew my whole family and then wrote characteristics above each person. For my oldest sister, I wrote, "Katie yells a lot." For a little sister, I wrote, "Lulu cries a lot." Over my own head I wrote "I help the most." I look at that and think I was a fiction writer in the beginning.
When I go to schools to talk about writing, I often talk about how I choose my writing topics to focus on issues kids face. I can be talking about censorship and bullying or self-image issues, and inevitably a student will raise his or her hand and ask me, "Do you have any pets?"
For the record, I have a wicked little cat named Sparkie who fits her name perfectly.

There is so much we can learn from entering the space of another person's life. It allows us to see how others think and behave, and it gives us a glimpse into the human condition in a way that is so real. We can learn from the lives of others. For instance, Janis Joplin was my role model. She gave me the courage to stop following along with the crowd and to do my own thing. Her death became my cautionary tale.
Would you share a favorite writing exercise for our readers?
The title of this exercise is "Who Is Listening?" Turn on the radio or turn on your iPod or click on music you've never heard before. As you listen to the song, freewrite and create a character listening to this song at the same time. As the song plays, describe the character and setting. Now listen to the song again and describe how this character is responding to the music and why. Would this character feel differently about this song if s/he weren't also dealing with ________?
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Thank you for joining us, Ann! We wish you and your books continued success!Readers, before entering our contest, please read our Book Giveaway Guidelines. Then, for a chance to win an autographed copy of Ann Angel's new book Janis Joplin: Rise Up Singing, post a comment to today's blog post telling us some sage advice you received about writing and who gave it to you. To qualify, your entry must be posted by 11 p.m. Friday, November 26, 2010 (Central Standard Time). The winner will be chosen in a random drawing and announced by 11 p.m., Saturday, November 27, 2010.
Wednesday, November 17, 2010
Taking My Gluteus Maximus for a Walk
Posted by
Carmela Martino
Reading Mary Ann's post on Monday reminded me of something Madeleine L'Engle says in Walking on Water: Reflections on Faith and Art:
Unfortunately, there's no magic formula. As Mary Ann said in her post, some days, even when we glue our butts to the chair, the words don't come. That's when I usually try taking the old gluteus maximus for a walk. As Julia Cameron says in The Artist's Way: "A brisk twenty-minute walk can dramatically alter consciousness." That altered consciousness often helps me hear what I couldn't when I was sitting in my chair.
Over the last few days, I've fallen behind in my word count goals for my project, and no matter how I tried, the words just wouldn't come. When that happened again today, I took a walk and thought about my story. As I walked, it occurred to me that much of the tension had leaked out of the story. Why? Because I'd made things too easy for my character. I needed to go back and change events so that she'd have to work harder to get what she wanted. Aha!
I know from experience that taking a walk doesn't always yield dramatic "aha" moments. But at least it helps keep my gluteus maximus from getting too big for the chair. :-)
I'm keeping this post short so I can get back to my novel-writing now.
Happy writing, all!
Carmela
P.S: I forgot to mention: there's a great book giveaway going on over at the MotherReader blog. Enter to win one of two sets of 25 books!
"If the artist works only when he feels like it, he’s not apt to build up much of a body of work. Inspiration far more often comes during the work than before it, because the largest part of the job of the artist is to listen to the work and to go where it tells him to go. Ultimately, when you are writing, you stop thinking and write what you hear."For my pseudo-NaNoWriMo project, I've been spending lots of time with Butt in Chair, or BIC, as Mary Ann calls it. I've discovered something interesting. Often, when I first sit down at the computer, I have no idea what I'm going to write about next or where the story will go. Those days usually start with me tweaking what I did the day before, trying to add sensory details to make the scene come alive. Then, somewhere along the way, inspiration kicks in and I'm soon typing away. As L'Engle says, the story starts telling me where to go. I know the inspiration wouldn't have come along if I hadn't been sitting there, listening, Butt in Chair.
Unfortunately, there's no magic formula. As Mary Ann said in her post, some days, even when we glue our butts to the chair, the words don't come. That's when I usually try taking the old gluteus maximus for a walk. As Julia Cameron says in The Artist's Way: "A brisk twenty-minute walk can dramatically alter consciousness." That altered consciousness often helps me hear what I couldn't when I was sitting in my chair.
Over the last few days, I've fallen behind in my word count goals for my project, and no matter how I tried, the words just wouldn't come. When that happened again today, I took a walk and thought about my story. As I walked, it occurred to me that much of the tension had leaked out of the story. Why? Because I'd made things too easy for my character. I needed to go back and change events so that she'd have to work harder to get what she wanted. Aha!
I know from experience that taking a walk doesn't always yield dramatic "aha" moments. But at least it helps keep my gluteus maximus from getting too big for the chair. :-)
I'm keeping this post short so I can get back to my novel-writing now.
Happy writing, all!
Carmela
P.S: I forgot to mention: there's a great book giveaway going on over at the MotherReader blog. Enter to win one of two sets of 25 books!
Monday, November 15, 2010
Writing with Your Gluteus Maximus
Posted by
mary ann rodman
It's Monday. It's raining. I left the windows down in my car last night. Does it get any better than this?
What I really want to do is curl up in front of the fire with my dog, a comforter and a supremely scary book I started Friday and didn't have time to read over the weekend. I left the two main characters stranded in the desert with two creepy teens that I just know are going to turn out to be serial killers.
Instead, I am writing. That's what I do. There are writers like Stephen King and Joyce Carol Oates who I suspect are married to their computers, their output is so prodigious. I just know they arise every morning, a song in their hearts and the next chapter bursting from their fingertips.
I am not one of those people.
For one thing, I am not a morning person. I literally walk into walls until noon. Not a good trait if you are a teacher or a mother, and I am both. I am a night writer. My creative mind doesn't kick into gear until about three in the afternoon---about the same time I pick up my daughter from school, and my second job kicks in--mother to a high maintenance sixteen-year-old. (For those of you who are trying to write with toddlers at home, I hate to tell you this but writing-mothering never gets easier.) By midnight, my creative mind has turned to mush. So, like it or not, I have become a daytime writer. My work day is 8 am to 3 pm, pretty much the same hours I taught.
When I taught, I had a forty five minute drive to turn my brain on (listening to NPR helped a lot). Now, I have to hit the ground running morning at 5:45, to get my daughter (also not a morning person) going. Fortunately I have a husband who can save the world by 9 am or no one would ever accomplish anything before noon.
With them gone, my brain in neutral, I listen to a half hour of NPR (my mental jumper cables), take my cup of coffee, and plunk my gluteus maximus in front of the computer. (This is known as BIC---butt in chair.) My mind protesting all the way, I start writing. I promise myself to write for 15 minutes, even if I am only typing "I can't think. I want to go back to bed. I want to take the dog for a walk."
A more disciplined person than I could probably do all those things, and still have a productive writing day. But I am a Master Procrastinator. Going back to bed will lead to reading in bed, which will lead to reading until the book is done....and so is my writing day. So it's BIC for fifteen minutes.
Most days, in those fifteen minutes, my brain turns on and picks up where I left off yesterday. Or it comes up with something that has been percolating on the back burner for awhile. Before I know it, three or four hours are gone (that's as long as my fingers can work even on the best of days). Three or four hours are up, and now I can take the dog for a walk (where I will probably going on thinking, planning tomorrow's work.)
Some days, however, are total duds. Fifteen minutes of BIC, and I still have nothing to show for it. I used to make myself stare at a blank computer screen for hours, waiting for the Muse to arrive. I don't know about you, but staring at a blank screen for hours will eventually lead to a "quick" game of solitaire or Boggle, to "stimulate" my brain. Who am I kidding? And of course, the longer I Boggle, the guiltier I feel about not writing....and well, the beat goes on. Eventually I had to accept that there are going to be days when fifteen minutes is all that is going to happen. Sometimes I write something really great in those fifteen minutes....and can't go any further. It's a relief to know I have fulfilled my personal commitment, even if it didn't have the results I want.
As writers, I am sure you have at least three people a month ask you how they can "write their story."
(Or sometimes it's "how can I get my book published?" only to learn that "the book" has not been written.)
"Here is the secret to writing," I say in a mysterious voice. The would-be-writer leans toward me, ready to drink in my literary wisdom.
"B-I-C," I say. Sometimes the other person actually writes this down. Mostly they blink and ask "Un- BIC? Like you use a Bic pen?"
"No, it means Butt-in-Chair. Lots of Butt-in-Chair. You could write standing up; I hear Thomas Wolfe did. But most of us write better sitting. For long periods of time. Day after day."
And now, having applied my gluteus maximus to couch for an hour and a half (there are variations), I will go wipe the rain off my car seats.
Does it get any better than this?
Posted by Mary Ann Rodman
What I really want to do is curl up in front of the fire with my dog, a comforter and a supremely scary book I started Friday and didn't have time to read over the weekend. I left the two main characters stranded in the desert with two creepy teens that I just know are going to turn out to be serial killers.
Instead, I am writing. That's what I do. There are writers like Stephen King and Joyce Carol Oates who I suspect are married to their computers, their output is so prodigious. I just know they arise every morning, a song in their hearts and the next chapter bursting from their fingertips.
I am not one of those people.
For one thing, I am not a morning person. I literally walk into walls until noon. Not a good trait if you are a teacher or a mother, and I am both. I am a night writer. My creative mind doesn't kick into gear until about three in the afternoon---about the same time I pick up my daughter from school, and my second job kicks in--mother to a high maintenance sixteen-year-old. (For those of you who are trying to write with toddlers at home, I hate to tell you this but writing-mothering never gets easier.) By midnight, my creative mind has turned to mush. So, like it or not, I have become a daytime writer. My work day is 8 am to 3 pm, pretty much the same hours I taught.
When I taught, I had a forty five minute drive to turn my brain on (listening to NPR helped a lot). Now, I have to hit the ground running morning at 5:45, to get my daughter (also not a morning person) going. Fortunately I have a husband who can save the world by 9 am or no one would ever accomplish anything before noon.
With them gone, my brain in neutral, I listen to a half hour of NPR (my mental jumper cables), take my cup of coffee, and plunk my gluteus maximus in front of the computer. (This is known as BIC---butt in chair.) My mind protesting all the way, I start writing. I promise myself to write for 15 minutes, even if I am only typing "I can't think. I want to go back to bed. I want to take the dog for a walk."
A more disciplined person than I could probably do all those things, and still have a productive writing day. But I am a Master Procrastinator. Going back to bed will lead to reading in bed, which will lead to reading until the book is done....and so is my writing day. So it's BIC for fifteen minutes.
Most days, in those fifteen minutes, my brain turns on and picks up where I left off yesterday. Or it comes up with something that has been percolating on the back burner for awhile. Before I know it, three or four hours are gone (that's as long as my fingers can work even on the best of days). Three or four hours are up, and now I can take the dog for a walk (where I will probably going on thinking, planning tomorrow's work.)
Some days, however, are total duds. Fifteen minutes of BIC, and I still have nothing to show for it. I used to make myself stare at a blank computer screen for hours, waiting for the Muse to arrive. I don't know about you, but staring at a blank screen for hours will eventually lead to a "quick" game of solitaire or Boggle, to "stimulate" my brain. Who am I kidding? And of course, the longer I Boggle, the guiltier I feel about not writing....and well, the beat goes on. Eventually I had to accept that there are going to be days when fifteen minutes is all that is going to happen. Sometimes I write something really great in those fifteen minutes....and can't go any further. It's a relief to know I have fulfilled my personal commitment, even if it didn't have the results I want.
As writers, I am sure you have at least three people a month ask you how they can "write their story."
(Or sometimes it's "how can I get my book published?" only to learn that "the book" has not been written.)
"Here is the secret to writing," I say in a mysterious voice. The would-be-writer leans toward me, ready to drink in my literary wisdom.
"B-I-C," I say. Sometimes the other person actually writes this down. Mostly they blink and ask "Un- BIC? Like you use a Bic pen?"
"No, it means Butt-in-Chair. Lots of Butt-in-Chair. You could write standing up; I hear Thomas Wolfe did. But most of us write better sitting. For long periods of time. Day after day."
And now, having applied my gluteus maximus to couch for an hour and a half (there are variations), I will go wipe the rain off my car seats.
Does it get any better than this?
Posted by Mary Ann Rodman
Friday, November 12, 2010
Adventures on a YALSA Poetry Panel in Albuquerque for Poetry Friday!
Posted by
April Halprin Wayland
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Howdy! I was all set to write a whole post about the best advice I found on writing an acceptance speech. It’s in an article by Thomas Murrell: Speech Tips: Ten Things to Remember When Accepting an Award. The one that particularly struck me was:“End With a Call To Action. What is it that you want the audience to do? You are the role model - inspire them to greater heights!”
It’s terrific advice. It jump-started my stalled writing of the five-minute award acceptance speech I gave in Seattle this summer.
And if you’ll stay with me, I promise I’ll show you how that’s connected to what we TeachingAuthors call an Out and About:
This past weekend I was Out and About at the YALSA (Young Adult Library Services Association) Symposium in Albuquerque, New Mexico.
I should have known it was going to be a good conference from the start. On the shuttle from the airport, I met two wonderful women: Natashya Wilson, Senior Editor at Harlequin TEEN, and Jacque Alberta, editor at Zonderkidz (she’s the editor of Nikki Grimes’ forthcoming book, A Girl Named Mister.)
I was on a panel called THE FORMS AND FACES OF POETRY FOR TEENS created by (bowing low to the ground now) the woman behind the go-to-blog for children’s poetry, Sylvia Vardell.
Author and poet Janet Wong introduced me to Sylvia many years ago, and boy, am I glad she did.
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Sylvia Vardell, Ph.D: author, speaker, Texas Woman's University Professor and SO MUCH MORE! |
and the annual review guide, LIBRARIANS' CHOICES; whew!
It was fabulous to be included as one of the five poets on Sylvia’s panel. The others were: Jen Bryant, Ann Burg, Margarita Engle, and Pat Mora. (Sylvia wrote, “Betsy Franco had hoped to be part of our panel, but had to be in NYC to act in her son, James Franco's movie! Cool, huh?”)
Our poems, personalities, and backgrounds were all very different—that’s what made this panel so interesting. And Sylvia sure knows how to build a cozy community between the speakers and the attendees in a session.
The panel began with a Poets’ Q & A and ended with Poetry Improv Prompts. I loved the way her original format encouraged us to play off each other, like jazz improv—lots of fun!
Sylvia’s spells out the format in this post and shows you how this format can be used with teens.
I waited about a gazillion hours for lunch along with my tablemates YALSA president Kimberly Patton, two fabulous librarians whose names I've forgotten (someone please remind me!), author/poet Ellen Hopkins, and Albuquerque's own author, Carolee Dean, who has also posted about the YALSA Symposium
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Author Carolee Dean lives in Albuquerque! |
Oft-censored author / poet Ellen Hopkins |
at the YALSA Symposium
The best thing about the authors and editors and librarians I met at this conference was their generosity of spirit.
Authors Ellen Hopkins and Lauren Myracle spoke at the closing session about intellectual freedom and the banning of their books. Lauren quoted Judy Blume who has said that censorship is “Fear disguised as moral outrage.”
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Author Lauren Myracle spoke without notes-- as if she were speaking to a just a few special friends. |
Ellen and Lauren made us laugh, made us squirm, made us well up with tears, and, finally, their stories from the trenches of intellectual freedom were a call to action—they inspired us to greater heights.
So, inhale that inspiration--go out there and write what you need to write. Some reader, somewhere will need to read exactly that.
drawings (c) by April Halprin Wayland
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